What follows is not for the squeamish.
James Patrick Kelly, Murder Your Darlings
Kym turned me on to this article a couple of weeks ago, and I’m beginning to understand what it’s all about. The item that resonates most at the moment is toss out that extra twist and the plot might come clear,
something that I’ve applied (to good effect, I think) while updating the excerpts I posted earlier.
There was a line in tonight’s episode of Angel that’s à propos to my story. Paraphrasing a bit, it’s that a sign of insanity is repeating the same events over and over.